i think that's beautiful. pieces solving a puzzle.

[compsci]

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[compsci]

you know i'd do anything you asked me to.

[asyndeton]

I know. You're such a good girl.

[compsci]

only when you ask me to be.

[asyndeton]

And when I ask you to be bad?

[compsci]

i might not know whether to obey or not. a bad girl might not listen to what she's told.

[asyndeton]

[ He honestly feels a little stupid doing this, but also... It's cliche as hell, he feels like that dumbass from 50 Shades but it's also kind of hot. Mostly because it means he's thinking about Daisy, naked, giving him that look she gives him when she gets so turned on she has to squirm in her seat. ]

Sounds to me like a misbehaving bad girl would need to be punished.

[compsci]

[ it's absolutely ridiculous... and yet, in her chair, she's squirming anyway. damn capitalism getting in the way of what should be a very good time. ]

she might. she might want to know what kind of punishment to expect if she were to misbehave.

[asyndeton]

[ Capitalism ruins everything. ]

I think that would depend on how much she misbehaves. She shouldn't get a spanking unless she really deserves it, don't you think?

[compsci]

is a spanking really a punishment if she wants it, though?

[ how cheeky ]

[asyndeton]

I guess that depends on how hard she gets spanked.

[compsci]

if it doesn't leave a mark, does it count?

[asyndeton]

I'm not going to bruise you, baby.

[ Whoops, he broke character. Oh well. Matt's not cut out for this role-play game. ]

[compsci]

[ he lasted longer than she thought he would, tbh ]

i didn't mean a bruise, just a little red. i know you wouldn't hurt me.

[asyndeton]

[ He's trying! He wants to make her happy. Even if he doesn't really know what he's doing. ]

Okay. A little red I can do.

[ Especially because Matt will also rub soothing cream into her ass and thighs when they're done and pamper her as much as she'll tolerate because he'll feel guilty about hurting her even though he knows she'll like it (and so will he). ]

[compsci]

[ half the fun of a little pain is the aftercare, okay. she won't complain about being spoiled rotten afterwards. ]

will you spank me until i beg you to touch me?

[asyndeton]

You need to be more specific than that, baby.

[ Go on, Daisy. Tell him how you want him to touch you. ]

[compsci]

[ she didn't want to spook him! sometimes he's like a baby deer who startles when she gets too explicit, okay ]

i thought you wanted me to be good. good girls don't talk about how they want you to fuck them senseless, do they?

[asyndeton]

[ A massive, six-two nearly two hundred pound baby deer. Well, she's not entirely wrong. ]

They could, if they wanted to. I'd find it hard to complain. A bad girl would tell me how she wanted me to touch her though, don't you think?

[ Is he doing this right?? ]

[compsci]

[ "doing it right" is really just "does she still want him to touch her" ... and that answer is definitely still yes. so. ]

a bad girl might want you to bend her over the edge of the bed after you've spanked her, you know.

[asyndeton]

And leave her there? That sounds like a pretty good punishment.

[compsci]

for you or for me?

[ let's face it, he wants to fuck her as bad as she wants it. ]

[asyndeton]

I can always just go jerk off, remember? With your hands tied, you can't do much of anything until I let you.

[ Of course he does. That's not the point. ]

[compsci]

[ why is that so hot, how dare he ]

i don't want you to do that. i want you to touch me.
please.

[asyndeton]

[ She's the one who started all of this, he's just along for the ride. ]

Tell me exactly what you want me to do to you.

[compsci]

i want you to come home, tie me up, spank me until i can't sit still, and then bend me over and fuck me hard enough for all your neighbors to hear me scream your name.

[ he asked. ]