i think that's beautiful. pieces solving a puzzle.

[compsci]

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[asyndeton]

That's my girl.

[ An audience would be awkward, considering what he wants to do to her. ]

[compsci]

[ she almost sends something terrible back, but opts instead just to focus on cleaning up as best she can, straightening her room until it's something close to livable before he gets there with whatever snacks he's decided on. ]

i'm gonna hop in the shower.
don't get lost in the snack aisles.